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标题:
送大蒜赏玩：三日一首外国抒情诗
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作者:
abracadabra
时间:
2007-1-21 09:59
标题:
送大蒜赏玩：三日一首外国抒情诗
<p>一日太短，情诗太窄，故期为三日，诗改抒情。</p><p> 最高虚构笔记（选节）</p><p> --------华莱士·斯蒂文斯（美国） （赵毅衡译）</p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">两个本质相反的东西似乎</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">互相依靠对方，就像男人依靠女人、日依靠夜、想象</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">依靠真实。这就是变化的根源。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">冬与春，冰冷的联系，却在拥抱</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">而欢乐的细节就从中出现。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">音乐好像感觉落到寂静上，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">这种**我们能够感受，却不能理解。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">早晨和下午相抱得那么紧，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">北方和南方本是内在的一对，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">阳光和雨露复合，就像一对情人</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">漫步走去，变成一个最绿的身体。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">这些孤独的号角在孤独中</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">并不是在回应另一种孤独；</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">一根细弦为一大群声音说话。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">参与者参与使他们变化的事。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">孩子触摸一个身体，一件东西，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">就取得那种特征。船长和水手</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">是一个人，水手和大海是一体。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">跟着我，哦我的伙伴，我的朋友，我自身</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 80.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 7.71gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">是姐妹兼安慰，是兄弟兼欢乐。</span></p><p></p>
作者:
财神
时间:
2007-1-21 17:01
<p>哦，给大蒜的啊！</p><p>偶闪！</p>
作者:
郑鸣谦
时间:
2007-1-21 22:07
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">音乐好像感觉落到寂静上，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">————</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">这句似乎拖沓，去掉“感觉”或许够了。</span></p>
作者:
一诺千金
时间:
2007-1-22 02:09
<p>貌似大蒜说的对</p><p>嘿嘿！</p>
作者:
abracadabra
时间:
2007-1-22 05:05
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>郑鸣谦</i>在2007-1-21 14:07:00的发言：</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">音乐好像感觉落到寂静上，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">————</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">这句似乎拖沓，去掉“感觉”或许够了。</span></p></div><p>去掉“感觉”，就偏离了原诗所指的意思。</p><p>感觉在此不是动词，而名词。此二句原诗为 music falls on the silence like a sense, / a passion that we feel, not understand. 意为音乐落到寂静之上, 好似我们能够感受、但不能理解的一种感觉（a sense）、或一种**（a passion ）。照顾到原诗的结构，赵毅衡在这里用了分译的处理方法。我认为还是可以的。</p><p>斯蒂文斯是我最喜欢的美国诗人之一，以后还会选几首上来。 </p>
作者:
月瘦风清刀寒
时间:
2007-1-23 23:36
好好学习
作者:
abracadabra
时间:
2007-1-26 10:37
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span><strong><font size="3">言辞的片断</font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span><strong> </strong></span><font size="1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">约瑟夫·布罗茨基</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">（傅浩</span><font face="Times New Roman">
<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">黄亚锋</span><font face="Times New Roman">
</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">译）</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">我认识这股拂过绵绵草地的风</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">草屈服于它一如曾屈服于鞑靼人的马蹄。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">我认识这张落在泥泞中的树叶</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">像一个被自己鲜血染红的王子。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">此际雨箭四射，斜打着</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">一座小木屋的墙壁在另一片土地，</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">秋天就这样泪水挂腮地倾诉，</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">像鸣声飞荡的鹅。而当我把眼光</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">投向天花板，我不是赞颂</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">那个渴求人类战争的所在</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">而是在呼唤你的哈萨克名字现在它哽在</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="2">我的喉咙里作为通向这个部落的一个口令。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; TEXT-INDENT: 173.25pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd; mso-char-indent-count: 16.5;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="2"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 63pt; TEXT-INDENT: 173.25pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.0gd; mso-char-indent-count: 16.5;"><font size="2"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">1975</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">）</span></font></p><p></p></span>
作者:
甜蜜的忧伤
时间:
2007-2-2 00:27
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>月瘦风清刀寒</i>在2007-1-23 15:36:00的发言：</b><br/>好好学习</div><p></p>
作者:
水龙头
时间:
2007-2-2 01:09
<p>暂时无法理会意境</p><p>我闪</p>
作者:
abracadabra
时间:
2007-2-2 06:50
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><strong><font size="4">沉思</font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><strong><font size="4"></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><font size="1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 威廉·斯塔福德</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">（黄继平译）</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="2"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">充满光的动物</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">穿过森林</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">走向举起装填着黑夜的枪</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">瞄准的某人</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">那就是世界：上帝</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">保持沉默</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">让它再次发生，</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 126pt; mso-para-margin-left: 12.0gd;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="2">再次，再次发生。</font></span></p>
作者:
郑鸣谦
时间:
2007-6-14 04:29
老哥继续啊。
作者:
ccsky
时间:
2007-6-17 23:40
学习下。
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